Title: On and On {SM challenge} *COMPLETED


Author: Pink Princess



Reviewed by: changminXmc

**** I have nothing against this author, further to this will be my opinion and what I think of the story as a reviewer.

1. Title: 5/5


* I think the title was perfectly fit for the story.

2. Poster and Background: 8/10


* The poster, I think it was really well made. The background was good as well. Though I felt it could've been made with a feeling of more sadness.

3. Forewords: 9/10


* The forward was interesting and sad. Made it an angst feeling for me.

4. Plot: 8/10


* The plot was interesting. But seemed more oringinal, but then these stories are my favorite. Sadness but still happy.

5. Flow: 8/10


*I think your flow was good. I didn't see any point where you rushed but I did feel like you should've added more detail of what happened before and why Junsu died. What did he die from?

6. Grammar, Spelling, Vocabularies: 13/15


* I saw little error/mistakes when I was reading this fanfic. But besides that, it was good.

7. Characterization: 4/5


* Hmm, I didn't see any characterization. But I don't think it bothered me. Since the character was on the poster and in the fanfic, the character was told. But I still felt that you should've wrote or had the character in the forward to tell people who the fanfic is on.

8. Originality: 8/10


* The creativeness of this was really good. I really like sad stories like these. But I must say, you left somethings unanswered. But I don't think this is anything new to me.

9. Writing Style: 8/10


* Your writing style is a little different from what I read in fanfic's. But then I understand that author's/writer's has many style of writing so I respect that. But all in all, it didn't bother me much.

10. Overall Enjoyment: 13/15


* To tell you the truth, I was not much into SuYin fanfic's. But this story was really really good. I really enjoyed it, but something made it alittle boring. But over all, I enjoyed this story.

Total: 84/100

P.S.

* I do not give out perfect scores, none so far. But I must say, you did a really good job on your fanfic. I really liked it. ^ ^