High School Romance by NaNa
Reviewed by Jwyl


1. Title: 4/5
I’ve seen too much stories with the words ‘High School’ in it.

2. Poster and Background: 9/10
I really like your poster. But I think the background would be better if it wasn’t as bright.

3. Forewords: 7/10
Summary could have been a bit better and explained more thoroughly.

4. Plot: 7/10
Needs to be more thought out.

5. Flow: 6/10
I think you’re speeding things way too quickly. The characters are falling in love with each other way too fast. And then, all of a sudden, three new guys pop in. I just think maybe taking it slower might be a better idea.

6. Grammar, Spelling, Vocabularies: 8/15
I spotted quite a lot of spelling and grammar mistakes as I was reading your story.

7. Characterization: 5/5
I like the way you write how the characters feel towards each other.

8. Originality: 8/10
I think it is able to become even more original if you just thought things differently.

9. Writing Style: 8/10

10. Overall Enjoyment: 10/15

Total: 72/100



I’m sorry if you don’t like your score. But you’re definitely able to improve. Good work though. I’m a fan of Arron and WuZun too : )