The End by UnknownViet

Reviewed by HidayahF luv GuiLunxWangXun


Title: 5/5
The title fits the story..

Poster and Background: -/10
I won’t insert this into the evaluating system since you already told me you are still waiting for your request ^^

Forewords: 6/10
I was quite statisfied about the forewords..Well,not too statisfied actually..

Plot: 9/10
It's quite refeshing.I think I've seen this kind of plot before.But,it makes me interested in your story..!!

Flow: 10/10
You gave me an ending.You handed me a start.The flow is okay but not that great,it's ok for me..

Grammar, Spelling, Vocabularies: 12/15
Your grammar is ok but you made a lot of typing errors,,,Well,people makes mistakes right?So as I..Nobody is perfect..

Characterization: 5/5
I love how your characters bloom with your writing.It's really good...Well keep it up girl!

Originality: 10/10
I loved the whole idea and all about this story.I would elaborate but my mind is really blank that time!

Writing Style: 8/10
It is neat and understandable.Well,good job girl!

Overall Enjoyment: 13/15
I really enjoy this story..Maybe not too enjoy..Because I'm not a Korean addict..I'm a Taiwanese addict..Sorry if I'm rude..But your story is really good!Keep it up!Hope to see your story in winglin again!I hope you will be a good writer in the future!!!

Total: 78/100