Title: Dedicated
Author: ctanonymous
Reviewer: changminXmc




****** I have nothing against this author or any problems. There's no bashing in this and I'm only telling her what I think of the story as a Review.

1. Title: 4/5

* The title, for me, I thought it was common. Though the title was related to the story and matched it. The title wasn't as catchy as I thought it was for me enough to read the story.

2. Poster and Background: 9/10

* The poster was really well made. I thought that it expressed how Hebe felt and how lonely she was. The color, I'd say it matches the story as well. Also, the background was good that it was faded enough so that readers can read the words/text.

3. Forewords: 7/10

* I liked the beginning but the forward wasn't as catchy as I thought it was.

4. Plot: 6/10

* I thought that this plot was common. Though it was a nice Valentine oneshot. And I've seen some of these stories, thats why I say its common.

5. Flow: 9/10

* Your flow was really good. There were no rushing through the story. Though, I think you could've have more details throughout the oneshot.

6. Grammar, Spelling, Vocabularies: 13/15

* While reading your oneshot, I didn't see much errors or grammars, maybe a few but it wasn't a big of a deal. Some were for example:

* "Hey, when are we gonna go to Starbucks?"

* "Hey, when are we going to Starbucks?" (I'm sure this was pointed out but just wanted to say this as an example.)

7. Characterization: 4/5

* I thought that you characterized your character really well. Yet, I did not like how you organized them. I thought that maybe you could have been more detailed or wrote it in a different way.

8. Originality: 7/10

* The originality of the story was ok for me and for Valentines oneshots, but I'm sure I've seen similar plots out there like these, so it wasn't as creative.

9. Writing Style: 8/10

* Your writing style is good, yet, its different from how others are. Nothing bothered me so I didn't mind the style.

10. Overall Enjoyment: 10/15

* I gave you a 10 out of 15 cause while reading this, I did not enjoyed it but I didn't mind reading it either. Though I think this oneshot was a cute story. ^ ^

Total: 77/100

P.S.
I say, you did a really good job on this oneshot. And I think you did really well. I also do not give perfect scores, and none so far.